Revise Comments

Surrealism Revise from qaaim goodwin on Vimeo.

For the revise I totally forgot to jot down my thoughts here over the days we were out of the class. When I look at the piece now I still feel that like some of my elements could be slowed down some more. I also don't know what is up with the eye flash. I thought it was pretty cool when I did it but now when I view it....I don't know. I need to re-think some shit.